Send up to three poems on the subject of or at least mentioning the words hell and/or heaven, totaling up to 150 lines in length including stanza breaks, in the body of an email message or attached in a Word file to donkingfishercampbell@gmail.com by 11:59 PM PDT on September 22nd. No PDF's please. Color and B&W artwork are also desired. Please send in JPG form. No late submissions accepted. Poets and artists published in Four Feathers Press Online Edition: Hell or Heaven will be published online and invited to read at the Saturday Afternoon Poetry Zoom meeting on Saturday, September 23rd between 3 and 5 pm PST.

Saturday, September 23, 2023

Gia Civerolo


flash bulb premonitions


She said a prayer for the safety of his soul

It wasn’t just because she had given him 

a blow job once when he was feeling very low


Their core really was a deep friendship

even though there were plenty who never 

believed it could be just that


It wasn’t the way he could sing silky soft 

on a stage, yet at the same time slick like the 

Dapper Dan tonic shellacking his hair back


It wasn’t the way he could swing with his 

black & white wing-tipped shoes pointing up

at the stars and her red lips, all at the same time


It wasn’t the way he placed his hand 

gently on the small of her back while 

dancing her around the floor


Or even the way he called her “doll” 

from days gone by, reminding the 21st century

of a past or how he could never quite fit in 

like he did so perfectly wearing white zoot suits


The fact was he called every woman “doll”

It still made her feel special

Giving her a quick little tingle

Unnerving her feministic esthetic only slightly


She knew It was his sweetness always 

seeping through, no matter how many times 

people and circumstances wanted to 

beat it out of him. Beginning with his father

and then every other man who slept with his mother


His heart was always broken by some skinny “doll”

in an off- the-shoulder tight black velvet dress 

who looked good sipping a martini

but could never heal the hurt 

no matter how pretty she was


He had charisma like a black and white film hero

always down on his luck but unlike the movies

he could never quite get together by the third act 

or any act for that matter


Everything was always on a repeating loop

She could almost hear the clicks of the film frame

sprockets slapping against the metal projector


For him the endings never faded in rich velvet black

It was always the lighting flash of white light reality

too bright for his blue eyes always flickering

trying to hide under downward lids


His vintage car was never running

despite the slight trace of grease 

underneath his fingernails

It was part of their ritual 

they never brought it up

she would always volunteer to drive

even though any other time 

she never wanted too


The devil would come to him 

Not even in the desert or after 40 nights

He would say to him “Hey, yo, Daddio”

Just like he would to any other guy


They would tell each other stories

not sure if they were even their own 

They would compare their botched tattoos

leaking bad ink all over their narratives 

and bodies, they never could erase


They would buy each other drinks,

Bum smokes one right after another

Show the tear tracks on each of their arms


Parked next to the train tracks

she waited in her car for him for hours

Pretending she wasn't feeling as lonely

as the train whistle in the black night


He always came back

resting his head on her shoulder

whisper- singing “So sorry doll” 

is all it would take, then all was forgiven


That morning she heard him singing the song

in her head before it played on her radio

She hadn’t seen or heard from him in years

maybe even a couple of decades 


She didn’t have the heart

to calculate how much time

had really gone by or remember

what made her finally walk away

She stared at the mirror 

seeing only who she used to be


She put on her best vintage dress

with lined hose on the back of her legs

always remaining perfectly straight 

Not a strand of her hair ever out of place 


She carried her pocket book, not a purse

Walking out to the flash of bright daylight

slashing across her body, it almost felt like hurt


She could not shake the sound of his 

velvet voice soul serenading in her brain


She didn’t know how she knew

It had never happened before

She just knew all the sweetness 

was gone from the world that day

as she put on her cat-eye sunglasses 

walking further into the bright sun






howling for angels 


She had written so much about 

angels and their feather white wings 

and ones with black feather too


She had nothing left to say

Angels stopped whispering 

to her pen


It didn’t stop her from mourning. 

It didn’t stop her from seeing 

them everywhere.

 

In lines in the grocery stores 

flipping through shiny magazines

In the shape of night clouds


In tattooed markings on 

monarch butterflies

Asleep in doorways 

with shopping cart treasures

A white spot flying 

across her cat’s face


Luminously surrounding babies

born and those hearing 

angels singing the blues 

smiling their last breath


She walked across grass 

well worn, gingerly stepping 

over and around

white grave markers

a little piece of heaven 

for eternity, for a price 


Life is reduced to a headline

A one-line description


No not her

She was sending a siren

a scream in a high frequency

only angels could hear


She was going end 

it all in a haiku:


The angels showed up

In the graveyard.  She needed

the comfort of cliche.






you won a trip!

*(pomo haiku)


Bouncing back & forth


between heaven/hell. Landed


middle murky earth



*pomo haiku: pomo is short for “postmodern” in reference to the genre of literature that avoids absolute meaning and does not assume universality.


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