Send up to three poems on the subject of or at least mentioning the words hell and/or heaven, totaling up to 150 lines in length including stanza breaks, in the body of an email message or attached in a Word file to donkingfishercampbell@gmail.com by 11:59 PM PDT on September 22nd. No PDF's please. Color and B&W artwork are also desired. Please send in JPG form. No late submissions accepted. Poets and artists published in Four Feathers Press Online Edition: Hell or Heaven will be published online and invited to read at the Saturday Afternoon Poetry Zoom meeting on Saturday, September 23rd between 3 and 5 pm PST.

Wednesday, September 20, 2023

Marianne Szlyk

Before My Mother Lands in Heaven,


she is a stewardess, flying

through turbulence, never crashing, never

landing.  Her skirt is too

short, showing each half-pound

creeping onto her small frame.

She cannot stop to pull

down her skirt or reapply

her makeup or fix her 

hair or even drink coffee.


The passengers plead for more

for more drinks for more

pillows more peanuts more sickbags.   

Customers call for more quiet 

as babies and grown men

howl as fat women pray 

to Jesus without a rosary.

She rolls her eyes, correcting

everyone’s grammar in her mind.


Her coworkers are friends.  They

roll their eyes as, voices

lowered, they discuss the passengers.  

While they stock the cart,

they give everyone nicknames.  They

have nicknames for coworkers, too.

They can’t find pillows; they 

fill the cart with blankets

or raincoats or sticky uniforms.

They can’t find Dramamine; they

raid their purses for M&Ms

breath mints or hard candy.


Someday this plane will land.

My mother swears that she

will go back to Maine

and never leave.  Her friends

and family will all have

to find her there.



Previously published in Blue Mountain Review as “If My Mother is in Purgatory”



Thelma at the Prado

After Bosch’s Garden of Earthly Delights


Hell might as well be on another planet,

circling a distant, winking star.


Musical instruments litter the parched surface  

where the damned swarm out from a shattered bass. 


Bosch has tattooed musical notes 

on naked bodies strewn across hard stone.


Beside an overturned table, a gap-toothed girl glares.

Balancing a die on her head like a halo,


she sings off-key to a rabbit’s blasts on a pipe.

In the background, all buildings burn.


Sinners break ranks like beetles, 

riding knives on the acidic river


to escape the flames and the artist’s gaze.



Originally published at Duane’s PoeTree



Death and the Miser

After Hieronymus Bosch’s panel of the same name


In the end, Death slips in,

the only whiteness in a room

tinged with blood and sweetly rotting 

flesh’s infectious pink.  Terra cotta curtains

are drawn against a dizzying sun.

Death’s light fingers on the door

smell of absence, not brimstone.


He is a wide-eyed neighbor

looking for gossip, looking for loot

like the green-clad brother who clutches

the miser’s coins for his own.


Death sees the blue-ish angel,

color of marble and the future’s

scrubbing powder, holding out a slim

crucifix.  The tiny devil, slimy gob

of spit and ashes, offers a bag 

of coins heavy enough to weigh

the miser down.  


Nevertheless, Death will not 

stride into this crowded sick room,

forcing the dying man to choose

between coins and crucifix, Hell and

Heaven.


He is waiting for the miser

to decide.  



Originally published in Setu.


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